I love it, haikus aren't easy to write, you need to notice the syllables and I don't know what :P
Only the syllables :) They should be in the order 5-7-5. You can relax the rule though, as long as the syllable count remains less than or equal to 17.
Thank you :)
great haiku! They are so hard to do. I've tried a couple and they were horrible. This was wonderful. Have a great weekend Zainab.
Thanks, Jules. I hope you have a great one too :)
I enjoy haiku so thanks for posting yours.
Thank you Elizabeth :)
I tried my hand at haikus last year. It was a challenge to keep the syllables to 5-7-5 but then I always love myself a good challenge. A very true haiku you have written. And I absolutely adore the picture you've clubbed it with.
Yep, challenges are fun! Thanks Sania :)
You captured a bit of sadness in that little haiku, paired with that cute little photo. Sweet and sad.#atozchallenge, Kristen's blog: kristenhead.blogspot.com
Glad I could get across what I meant. Thanks, Kristen! :)